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Daredevil

Posted by the prisoner's wife On 7:57 PM
daredevil

17 months       training
     legs arms and toes
exploring every inch
of new
      world

fear lives not
in his heart
    mine surges
when i see him

brown legs jumpping
from tables or chairs
or jungle-gyms or stairs
straining to reach
                     everything

i wonder when
he will be tamed
reckless spirit lost
amid mommy's worring words

7 Response to 'Daredevil'

  1. Stephen Bess Said,
    http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1175777100000#c5174894790486521437'> Thursday, April 05, 2007 5:45:00 AM

    It's good to see you back in swing. :)Nice poem. A restless spirit can be tamed by the Spirit. Good to see you sis! Peace~

     

  2. Ali's Zay Said,
    http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1175785080000#c3124844948980923649'> Thursday, April 05, 2007 7:58:00 AM

    Omigosh! My heart skipped a beat when I saw you on my blog. I'm so glad to see that you are OK. I've been a terrible blog citizen for the past 4 months but I certainly will do my best to catch up. Stay strong and regards to your Beloved. Peace and Love,

    Ali’s Zay

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  3. writerwoman Said,
    http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1175789760000#c1947850315214343842'> Thursday, April 05, 2007 9:16:00 AM

    The feelings in this poem are universal and yet you do a good job at making them personal and making me think of how they relate to may own struggles in life to let go and hold on.

     

  4. LyteNLuvLee Said,
    http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1175823660000#c2443028579309928546'> Thursday, April 05, 2007 6:41:00 PM

    This is a great poem! It reminds me of my little one at age 2!

    Lyte

     

  5. http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1175874780000#c6449112088347055703'> Friday, April 06, 2007 8:53:00 AM

    bless: who knows what will happen next week when i'm back at work! lol

    zay: i was glad to BE at your blog again. i'm going to link you so i don't go so long without visting again. have fun in Ja!

    writerwoman: thank you. i try to make my writings personal, but if you do so you will strike a universal chord. i'm glad you were able to connect.

    lytenluvlee: thank you! this is like the first poem i've ever written for my son. all day i kept pulling him off of things he was trying to climb on..lol

     

  6. bygpowis Said,
    http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1176402180000#c6848676753628940991'> Thursday, April 12, 2007 11:23:00 AM

    i see my boy in your poem. i love to see my boy. thanks.

     

  7. http://theprisonerswife.blogspot.com/2007/04/daredevil-17-months-arms-and-toes.html?showComment=1178136240000#c7080338211407398872'> Wednesday, May 02, 2007 1:04:00 PM

    this is deep, and I love every word.